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Rad Sechrist
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 11, 2003 11:41 pm 
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I plan to do at least one of these a month. I thought I'd let you guys check it out before I add color. (I put temporary words for you guys to read which I will replace later)



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Kazu
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Haha! I love the understated "surprise". Great punch!
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agent44
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Pretty cool.
What's wrong with these temporary words?
Will it be fully colored?
Man, with all this talk about webcomics, and with everyone doing them, I'm getting the itch.

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Phil
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Great, Rad! So simple and winning. I don't see a problem with the words/lettering.
I like it all!
Cool.
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Kazu
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On super nitpicky crit, Rad. The perspective on the bottom of the soda machine in the first panel is peeling down a little too much, but I see that this was probably a solution for having the bat (Ebs?) a little too far down. I think your quickest solution would be to make the base of the machine smaller (thinner) than the top portion and pull the perspective back up. If this sounds confusing, just let me know, and I can sketch up what I mean.
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