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Cleaning up the old posts.

Post by FrancesLee » Thu Mar 25, 2010 9:14 pm

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Post by SMVidaurri » Fri Mar 26, 2010 2:44 am

nice work. pretty impressive for two days, good job
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Post by FrancesLee » Fri Mar 26, 2010 3:36 pm

Thanks! It was definitely tiring to pump it out so fast...

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Post by FrancesLee » Fri Mar 26, 2010 3:42 pm

Just checked out your work, do you use mainly watercolor? Or colored inks? I like the website and blog!

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Re: the End. (short comic)

Post by Mr. Average » Tue Mar 30, 2010 4:51 pm

In spite of your preliminary statement, I have to say that this reads more as a kind of limited and snarky jab at christianity, which is disappointing. But on the other hand, the linework is really impressive - clean and very slick, with expressive layouts and colors. A really nice piece of artwork, and impressive that you completed it in such a short span of time!

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Re: the End. (short comic)

Post by FrancesLee » Tue Mar 30, 2010 8:02 pm

I am glad you've brought up the snarky jab at Christianity comment. This is just one story of many other religious points of views that I have been studying in my comparative religion course and what other religions view of one another. Perhaps I should have pointed that out from the beginning.

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Re: the End. (short comic)

Post by gau dog » Fri Apr 02, 2010 3:19 pm

Catchy title. Pretty good output for 2 days. Art's nice. I noticed where you've cut corners on copying and pasting, gradient shading. But I think it's only noticeable to artists. Actually, I think the oppa's smug dialogue speaks worse about the Taoists than it does the Christians anyway. It's interesting the girl's perspective inside the house is cold, empty, boring in contrast with the brightness of the outside. Not very flattering if that is the house of Taoism. Also, her initial sight of the Christians is equally bright until her oppa puts them down.

I guess I also would remark on the coloring of the girl and oppa on the outside. I would prefer more yellow blended in. The girl's dress is pure white; it should reflect a tinge of yellow if the lighting is a warm yellow as well. Also, there's these lines/underlying paper edge texture or something... I'd clean that up.

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