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Wow this is really cute and those animals are fantastic! Good luck getting this published!

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Thanks Joost!
We decided to add an intro of sorts. (attached) Going to print the 5th and final dummy and submit this sucka this week to Lee and Low Books!

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Starting to wonder if it's impossible for an unpublished writer or illustrator (me) to get picked up by a publishing company. Maybe self-publishing to gain exposure is a better route..

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The bunny pictures are remarkable- your obvious command of bunny anatomy shows, if only because you manage to make it look easy, with all the bunnies the same size, simply-drawn from all angles, and all convincing. The lone bunny climbing out of his cage is terrific! You could almost make the story work without any words at all. I can tell, for example, that the girl in the last panel is trying to disentangle bunny from dreads. Without any descriptive text.

Thanks Birckmi,
I can see what you mean about the words not needed to understand, but both myself and my writer like the rhyming of the story. Here is a dialog example page. Also and example of one of a few pages that has type on the page.

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