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"Dear Summer" comic

Post by jess_smiley » Thu Jun 18, 2009 4:33 pm

Here's my first all digital comic. Big step for me, but I have LOTS of work to do! Any suggestions would be really helpful! Thanks.

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Post by househatke » Fri Jun 19, 2009 6:09 am

Well said.

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Post by jess_smiley » Wed Jul 01, 2009 10:08 am

thanks. I'm working on some more like this.

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Post by Seth Wolfshorndl » Thu Jul 02, 2009 6:24 pm

Simple and effective. The art matches the story well.
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Post by jess_smiley » Thu Jul 02, 2009 7:22 pm

Thanks, Seth!

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Post by Notches » Fri Jul 03, 2009 9:58 pm

I like the loose and free style that you use here.Maybe you can use more tones to make the colours richer?Still,this is just my personal preference. =)

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Post by jess_smiley » Sat Jul 04, 2009 11:16 am

Good point, Notches. Some flowers and trees would have been nice on the hill and in the last frame---definitely would have made for a richer palette. Hm. The next one will be better.

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