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 Post subject: "Dear Summer" comic
PostPosted: Thu Jun 18, 2009 4:33 pm 
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Here's my first all digital comic. Big step for me, but I have LOTS of work to do! Any suggestions would be really helpful! Thanks.

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Well said.

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thanks. I'm working on some more like this.

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Simple and effective. The art matches the story well.

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Thanks, Seth!

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I like the loose and free style that you use here.Maybe you can use more tones to make the colours richer?Still,this is just my personal preference. =)


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Good point, Notches. Some flowers and trees would have been nice on the hill and in the last frame---definitely would have made for a richer palette. Hm. The next one will be better.

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