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DancingDoorGuy
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Post by DancingDoorGuy » Wed Feb 21, 2007 10:58 pm

This is the first page in a little story I'm telling.

Feed back is very very welcomed.
(first time posting here)

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Post by Josh-Ulrich » Thu Feb 22, 2007 9:01 am

This looks sharp, very nice attention to detail.

My only crit is that the central figure in the last panel seems to be floating in space. If you give him a shadow, it will anchor him down and keep the page from flattening out.

Look forward to seeing more =)
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Post by DancingDoorGuy » Thu Feb 22, 2007 11:17 am

Josh-Ulrich wrote:This looks sharp, very nice attention to detail.

My only crit is that the central figure in the last panel seems to be floating in space. If you give him a shadow, it will anchor him down and keep the page from flattening out.

Look forward to seeing more =)
Good eye... thanks!
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Post by DancingDoorGuy » Thu Feb 22, 2007 11:49 am

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Post by Sebastian Agresti » Thu Feb 22, 2007 4:39 pm

I really like the style
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Post by DancingDoorGuy » Thu Feb 22, 2007 10:01 pm

Thanks Sabastian.

Here's the third page. Enjoy!

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Post by DancingDoorGuy » Fri Feb 23, 2007 10:28 am

The fourth page...

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Post by Dresden Codak » Fri Feb 23, 2007 11:16 am

This is really cool stuff. The faces have a lot of personality, and the attention to detail is staggering. Some things are a little hard to make out because it's still in pencil, but I think I can follow most of it. I especially like the guy's mustache and the exceptionally well rendered hands. Keep it up!
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Post by Wei2k » Mon Mar 05, 2007 1:08 pm

Hey this is a really professional looking comic. Can't wait to see more.
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Post by meesimo » Tue Mar 06, 2007 12:57 pm

These pages are looking great. Some nice inks could really make these sing. Looking forward to seeing more!
Cheers
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Post by DancingDoorGuy » Tue Mar 06, 2007 6:27 pm

Thanks for all the kind words everyone.
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Post by PaparazziPulse » Wed Mar 07, 2007 9:34 am

Very nice job. The backgrounds have a rich amount of detail, and the character designs look charming.
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