Wine Label: vent du sud/south wind= lady A or B

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Wine Label: vent du sud/south wind= lady A or B

Post by Bordeleau » Mon Feb 12, 2007 10:59 am

Two differents ladys for a wine label: A or B you love the most ?


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Post by Og » Mon Feb 12, 2007 11:31 am

They're both very appealing.

Personally, I like the first one better. It's the hair.

Additionally, I like the grey shading on the gentleman's legs in the first one. I'm rather fond of the curlicues above the glass, but I'd suggest removing it because it looks like smoke. (or, go all the way and make it look like a heart...)

For what it's worth, that's feedback from Random Artist #34574.
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Post by Michael Firman » Mon Feb 12, 2007 1:03 pm

Bon travail, Bordeleau! Je préfère le premier dessin aussi, mais peut-etre avec la bouche du deuxième, comme:


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That way, it keeps the face and hair of the first lady, but has both the characters smiling.
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Post by Bordeleau » Mon Feb 12, 2007 2:44 pm

Yep ! Both of you have great and good idea for #1, with smille of #2 and no curlicues ! I will do the corrections ! Thanks ! Merci à vous deux !
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Post by Bordeleau » Mon Feb 12, 2007 2:53 pm

Littles corrections:
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Post by Vince » Mon Feb 12, 2007 3:29 pm

Geat expressions and fluidity of drawing. 8)
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Post by aaron » Mon Feb 12, 2007 4:01 pm

sweet strokes!

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Post by Darwin » Mon Feb 12, 2007 4:33 pm

great drawings! I like the 2nd one better.

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Post by Wordsmith » Wed Feb 14, 2007 8:40 am

Moi je prendrais les corrections que tu as fait à l'image A mais je substituerais les faces des femmes...la deuxième semble plus gentille, on dirait :)
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