Hamburgers for One

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Post by EQ » Tue Jun 28, 2005 7:48 pm

wow. great storytelling and illustration, i really want to know more about this guy, he is a very interesting character. best of luck getting it printed.

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Post by Clank » Tue Jun 28, 2005 8:04 pm

This is SOOOO amazing! This is some of the best pacing I have ever seen.


Post by Miliucc » Wed Jun 29, 2005 2:28 am

Wow... this is the shittiest comic ever....

ok ok before everyone kills me let me explain... trying to sound some kinda original.. I was thinking of what to say besides that it was "amazing" and the "pacing" was great, considering that those two words must have gotten used liek 20 time before me.

But in all seriousness its a great story, I think even though the characters in the story are a little more mature. It still feels like high school for me all over again.. full of akwardnesses, and rejection.

Your style of drawing and painting people is the best I've seen in awhile. I love the rough edges and shadows you use to create a simple yet complex image.. It looks like it was throwen together, yet it probably took ages.

Looking at your site some amazing paintings. preferrably I love "Despite His Plea" I wish there was a larger image of it so I could make it my desktop.

Can't wait to see what comes next

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Post by demetrius » Wed Jun 29, 2005 5:29 pm

since everything else has been said, I'll settle with

I like this a lot. :-|

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Post by Mike Laughead » Wed Jun 29, 2005 8:17 pm

I loved this just like everyone else. I'm gonna give just one critique, I think the typography of the title "Hamburger for One" doesn't fit with the rest of the art. It seems too superhero-ish. I'm not sure how to make it better, I just think changing it would improve the piece (even though everything else is great.)
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Post by E » Fri Jul 01, 2005 12:56 am

"oh wow :shock: ... ahahha :lol:... creepy :?... awww, poor guy :oops: ..."
It was a pleasure my friend. Wow. Tho im tired, and its way past my bed time, and im on dail up... i couldnt leave my computer til all the images loaded... this was an infectuous read.

kudos, GREAT story/art :D

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Post by Ham » Fri Jul 15, 2005 6:12 pm

The detail in this amazes me.

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Post by pdaoust » Sat Jul 16, 2005 8:10 pm

I really love the pacing; it has a cinematic feel... you really get into the anticipation and the awkward pauses. It feels a lot like real life, and that guy does a lot of real-life things, which makes it easy to identify with. Who doesn't play with the salt shaker when they're waiting for something?

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Pleasure & pain combined

Post by Mr. Chuckles » Tue Jul 19, 2005 4:24 pm

I loved the artwork, it was realistic yet cartoony at the same time. The story and art were beautifully balanced; both simple but also full of complex detail -- allowing readers to take it at whatever pace suits them.

Excruciating pathos... I have to believe that maybe he still has a chance?!


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Re: Hamburgers for One

Post by fourmi » Fri Jul 22, 2005 4:10 am

Really,really nice! I really like the mood. very sensitive.

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Post by elara » Fri Jul 22, 2005 2:24 pm

That was really beautiful. Awesome work.
~~ Elara

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Post by Alex Deligiannis » Fri Jul 22, 2005 4:19 pm

These are gorgeous pages. Definitely needs to be printed.

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Post by TomBolton » Wed Jul 27, 2005 4:20 pm

This is phenominal. One of the best examples of sequential storytelling I have ever seen.


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fantastic... its real

Post by matthewart » Wed Jul 27, 2005 10:52 pm

This is amazing. just little detailed moments. Moments to moments. Its sad and funny. I feel bad for the guy. hmmm... I think I'll hit the gym, or go for a walk... ya a walk. But not to a hamburger place.

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Post by Guest » Mon Aug 01, 2005 12:12 pm

:D Nice Job man! Try and send it a newspaper first...Like the first part of it.

Um can any body tell me how i post comics up.

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