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dik pose

Post subject: Smoke- My first comic

Posted: Mon Dec 01, 2003 7:25 pm

Joined: Tue Nov 25, 2003 8:43 pm
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Location: Culver City

Well, I just updated some of my site, actually just put a comic named Smoke on there, I shoulda put this comic up way back in the summertime, but i kept procrastinating. I did this comic early this year, it was my first comic, 15 pages, written by my friend Josh Pruett (he also took care of lettering, next time I want to do that myself so its better intergrated with the art).

Handed out a bunch at San Diego con...though I didnt "want" to hand them out. Really gave me some confidence in my art at a time when I didnt like my art. (Truth is I never like my art, thus the issues I had with handing them out at con.) So take a look, let me know what you think.

http://www.richardpose.com/Smoke_home.htm

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Kazu

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Posted: Mon Dec 01, 2003 7:46 pm

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Joined: Tue Aug 19, 2003 8:59 pm
Posts: 9336
Location: Alhambra, CA

Man, Richard, I have no idea why you wouldn't feel confident in your amazing narrative skills (beside the fact you're an artist, of course. hehe)

These pages are incredible! The story flows well, the designs are appealing, and you maintain a high level of suspense up to the very end. I remember when I first saw your work I could tell you could pull off some nice sequential stuff, and I guess I was right! You've got a great style, Richard. Really nice work!

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davi

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Posted: Mon Dec 01, 2003 7:59 pm

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Joined: Wed Nov 26, 2003 12:46 pm
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very nice, was a good read

i only suggest making the text alittle bigger next time for online viewing.
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dik pose

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Posted: Tue Dec 02, 2003 9:53 pm

Joined: Tue Nov 25, 2003 8:43 pm
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Location: Culver City

Kazu-- you sure do know how to make a guy feel confident about his art. Thanks for all the kind words man.

Davi-- thanks for the kindness too, and yeah, i was wondering if the text was gonna be too small, I will definitely take that into account for my next stuff.

Does anyone follow a good rule when it comes to size of font for web-based stuff? Thanks for checking my stuff out guys, you "pump me up!"

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douglas a. bot

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Posted: Wed Dec 03, 2003 1:26 am

Joined: Mon Nov 24, 2003 3:42 am
Posts: 1298
Location: melbourne

Fantastic work Dik. Great characters and pacing. I want to read more.

Really cool.

d.

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chris

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Posted: Wed Dec 03, 2003 12:48 pm

Joined: Wed Aug 20, 2003 10:24 pm
Posts: 430

wow - cool drawings and great premise! muey bueno

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Rad Sechrist

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Posted: Wed Dec 03, 2003 9:58 pm

Joined: Thu Sep 04, 2003 3:53 pm
Posts: 2139

amazing stuff. Great story and art.

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dik pose

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Posted: Wed Dec 03, 2003 11:48 pm

Joined: Tue Nov 25, 2003 8:43 pm
Posts: 1948
Location: Culver City

thanks doug, chris and rad. I am just happy as all heck that I found this forum, I am getting all excited about doing my next comic. Thanks again for taking time to look at it.

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