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Wanted to see if I could handle the wordless comic, and here's part 1 of my attempt!

I'm really trying to get good at graphic storytelling, so if you notice anything that doesn't work, or something that just plain sucks, I'd be stoked to hear about it.

thank you for looking!












to be continued in part 2

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to be continued
thank you for reading!

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I'm really loving this Ryan... wonderful pacing and tone... it has a lovely mezzotint feel that makes feel etched... Keep them coming

willmj: awesome, thanks for reading! glad you like it














to be continued...

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Wow that was quick! The frame third from bottom what is it? Like the wood monster... very cool.

thanks! that's the log he fell from earlier, but if its hard to tell, i may have to redo it or scrap that one.

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Great tension... I can see it's a log now Keep them coming!

thanks! got a big update today

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just got back from an awesome 3 week road trip around America so i didnt have time to update!!! sorry for the long hiatus. hope you didnt forget what the story was about o_O















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Looks great... keep them coming

Very, very nice! I like this a lot. Especially how you can see the paper fabric and (water colour?). It kind of reminded me of an old childrens book from Ireland up until the creature exited the tree.
As you said wordless comic, I was kind of surprised when you had a THUD! suddenly in there. I wonder if just the outline of the thud could work, or something else maybe?

Anyway, magnificient stuff!

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