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PostPosted: Sat Oct 16, 2010 12:19 am 
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Wanted to see if I could handle the wordless comic, and here's part 1 of my attempt!

I'm really trying to get good at graphic storytelling, so if you notice anything that doesn't work, or something that just plain sucks, I'd be stoked to hear about it.

thank you for looking!
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to be continued in part 2

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 18, 2010 8:47 pm 
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 02, 2010 8:56 pm 
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to be continued :)
thank you for reading!

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PostPosted: Wed Nov 03, 2010 1:48 am 
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I'm really loving this Ryan... wonderful pacing and tone... it has a lovely mezzotint feel that makes feel etched... Keep them coming :D


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PostPosted: Wed Nov 03, 2010 2:21 am 
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willmj: awesome, thanks for reading! glad you like it :)

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PostPosted: Wed Nov 03, 2010 2:28 am 
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Wow that was quick! The frame third from bottom what is it? Like the wood monster... very cool.


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PostPosted: Wed Nov 03, 2010 11:56 pm 
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thanks! that's the log he fell from earlier, but if its hard to tell, i may have to redo it or scrap that one.

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PostPosted: Thu Nov 04, 2010 2:09 pm 
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 04, 2010 3:11 pm 
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Great tension... I can see it's a log now :) Keep them coming!


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PostPosted: Sat Nov 06, 2010 12:52 am 
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thanks! got a big update today :)

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PostPosted: Sat Nov 06, 2010 12:58 am 
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 07, 2010 12:58 am 
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just got back from an awesome 3 week road trip around America so i didnt have time to update!!! sorry for the long hiatus. hope you didnt forget what the story was about o_O

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PostPosted: Tue Dec 07, 2010 5:00 am 
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Looks great... keep them coming :)


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Very, very nice! I like this a lot. Especially how you can see the paper fabric and (water colour?). It kind of reminded me of an old childrens book from Ireland up until the creature exited the tree.
As you said wordless comic, I was kind of surprised when you had a THUD! suddenly in there. I wonder if just the outline of the thud could work, or something else maybe?

Anyway, magnificient stuff!

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