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jskotte
 Post subject: A little story
PostPosted: Mon May 03, 2010 2:26 am 
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Hi all, this is a little comic I made, the story popped into my head one very rainy day :)

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pH
 Post subject: Re: A little story
PostPosted: Mon May 03, 2010 7:49 am 
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Fun!

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SMVidaurri
 Post subject: Re: A little story
PostPosted: Tue May 04, 2010 8:02 pm 
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I really liked the story, great Idea, executed well. The pacing was nice

My only criticism was that I think you could have used a different font, or maybe done the word balloons in a different way, I think that would have improved the readability of your comic.

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thirdeyeh
 Post subject: Re: A little story
PostPosted: Tue May 04, 2010 8:42 pm 
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Very cool! I thought it was really magical and inventive. Can't wait to see what else you got your sleeve!

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jskotte
 Post subject: Re: A little story
PostPosted: Wed May 05, 2010 1:34 am 
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Hi and thanks for the comments, glad you liked it.
Regarding the font, do you have suggestions for a better one, I just got tired of looking at the ones in photoshop, so just picked one, and I agree, it doesn't look too good, but easy to fix :) What do you mean by different way with the word balloons, shape, size, color?
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Joost
 Post subject: Re: A little story
PostPosted: Fri May 07, 2010 1:24 pm 
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Very good story, really original!

What you could try with the word balloons is make them wider and less high, that will make the sentences easier to read.

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