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grubbug
 Post subject: Layla
PostPosted: Tue Jan 06, 2009 9:55 pm 
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I just found these boards and have been enjoying all of the beautiful art.

I would be very interested in hearing what people have to say about my work. Here is a one pager I finished earlier in the month.

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I am trying to put together some other stuff but I work kind of slowly.

Anyway, please let me know what you think.

Thanks!
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Sanaril
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Dude! That poor little dog!
I'm not digging the red speech bubbles (or the dog punting :) but it could be an interesting choice... I just think that saturated red is a little too bright. Plus in the kicking panel you have all this beautiful effort put into the foliage and etc. to the left and then to the right is just a large flat area of yellow for the house that just looks kind of unfinished.
That dog is cute though, nice expressions on him.

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