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Seth Wolfshorndl
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Post by Seth Wolfshorndl » Sun Jan 20, 2008 12:03 am

These are consistently funny! I really enjoyed the boat one and the Chuck Norris joke. The colorized versions are nice, but the b/w ones work just as well. I would go with whichever you feel more comfortable with.

Nice work!
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Post by Gunwhale » Sun Jan 20, 2008 8:55 pm

Thanks, Seth. I'm glad you like them.

I'm still experimenting with what I like. Some strips don't have a lot of action, so I don't really see a natural need for shadow. I thought coloring would add interest in those cases.
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Post by Gunwhale » Fri Jan 25, 2008 11:48 pm

Hey. New strip. I have a question though. The first one was the original strip, but I thought that it was lacking pacing and it crammed too much information into the second panel, so I stretched it out to another panel in the second one. Does that work better? It feels less congested and rushed to me.

Also, those who speak German, the last panel is supposed to say 'An Inconvenient Winter', but I wasn't sure which word to use for inconvenient. Is 'unbequem' (uncomfortable) appropriate? Thanks.

Oh, I forgot to mention, I have a blog up now for this strip. The link is in my quote.

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Post by willmj » Sat Jan 26, 2008 12:38 am

:lol: Number two is great... I Love this strip... :D

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Post by Gunwhale » Sun Feb 03, 2008 1:25 pm

Will, thanks so much man. I appreciate all the kind words.

Here's the new one.

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Post by Gunwhale » Sat Feb 09, 2008 9:56 am

New Strip. Critiques/comments?

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Post by Gunwhale » Sat Feb 16, 2008 10:42 am

Hey everyone. Here's my new strip.
Any critiques or comments are very welcome.
Thanks for reading.

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Post by Gunwhale » Sat Feb 23, 2008 11:32 am

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Post by Gunwhale » Mon Mar 17, 2008 10:08 am

I've had spring break and I've been only slightly lazy, but here are the most recent ones.

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Critiques and comments and insults are more than welcome. Thanks for reading.
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Post by willmj » Tue Mar 18, 2008 1:27 am

very funny lol !

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Post by Gunwhale » Sun Mar 30, 2008 11:36 pm

Thanks Will! Wow, haven't had a lot of time to check these boards lately, but here are the latest two strips.

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Post by Gunwhale » Sun Apr 06, 2008 9:58 pm

poppin fresh everybody.

this is based on a true story...

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...that involves me.
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Post by bluebottle » Sat Apr 12, 2008 10:47 am

really enjoyed these.
'something really witty/funny or profound here!'
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Post by Gunwhale » Wed May 21, 2008 10:34 am

bluebottle wrote:really enjoyed these.
Thanks a lot man. I'm glad to hear that.

I've been lazy in posting them here in the past month, but here are the 3 latest strips I've done. Comments welcome. Insults are also welcome.

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Oh by the way, I have all of these posted on my blog.
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Post by Gunwhale » Mon Jun 02, 2008 4:42 pm

Two new strips. I think I'm going to go bi-weekly with updates. Tell me how dumb these are.


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