FLIGHT

This is a quick comic I made as an intro/teaser to a story I have some ideas about. I made a few large ink drawings for my degree show and this comic was also something I could give away as an introduction to that.
I rushed it a bit but hopefuly the essence of it is clear.

Please let me know what you think, I want to improve as much as possible.

Here is the second chapter of the story. The last one was for a tight deadline and was quite rushed but this time I could spend a bit more time on it. I am having a few problems with character consistancy and backgrounds and angles but am mostly pleased with it. It was mainly done as a warm up and I probably wont add to it again for a while.

Feel free to give me constructive crit.
Thanks for looking!

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