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frak
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Post by frak » Fri Jun 08, 2007 9:52 pm

I had a lil mishap while riding my biketoday...

so I drew a comic about it.

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Post by Threshold » Sat Jun 09, 2007 9:52 pm

Awesome. So did the little bridge piece give out on you, or did your tire slip?
Oh, and did you really leave your bike in the ditch? :(

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Post by andrew fulton » Sun Jun 10, 2007 1:58 pm

i like the loose way you have inked and coloured this, and I like what you did there in the middle where you joined up the two panels, I think that works really well.
I do get a little lost when you fall in to the water. I am not really sure what happened. Did you just slip? Hit something? Try to jump an not quite make it? I think the last row is a little bit too compressed, and it might work better if you stretched it out into another row?

Nice excuse for stretching out in the grass for a while, though- that can't have been too horrible.

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