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by Ayo
Fri Feb 12, 2010 8:34 pm
Forum: Hotel Adriano
Topic: Long-form Webcomics... How Can They Be Effective?
Replies: 6
Views: 15991

Re: Long-form Webcomics... What's the Value?

I think that one has to tailor one's story for the medium. I like long form webcomics that are designed and written from a fundamental level to have each page stand as a clear unit of interest. Not necessarily in a punchline way, or even a cliffhanger way. What I mean is that a reader should be able...
by Ayo
Tue Aug 07, 2007 8:30 pm
Forum: Illustration/Animation/Design Lounge
Topic: Return to my character Angela.
Replies: 6
Views: 3452

Hi Ayo, sorry I've not commented on these before. You're putting a lot of background detail into these. That's great. A solid background adds depth. However, put your anatomy first and maybe your line quality too. In 123, angela's back looks kind of weird. The crease in the butt of her overalls loo...
by Ayo
Mon Jul 30, 2007 9:27 pm
Forum: Illustration/Animation/Design Lounge
Topic: Return to my character Angela.
Replies: 6
Views: 3452

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#124

More happens...
by Ayo
Mon Jul 23, 2007 10:23 pm
Forum: Illustration/Animation/Design Lounge
Topic: Return to my character Angela.
Replies: 6
Views: 3452

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#123...
by Ayo
Wed Jul 18, 2007 5:14 pm
Forum: Illustration/Animation/Design Lounge
Topic: Return to my character Angela.
Replies: 6
Views: 3452

#122.

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It goes on...
by Ayo
Sat Jul 14, 2007 10:32 pm
Forum: Illustration/Animation/Design Lounge
Topic: Return to my character Angela.
Replies: 6
Views: 3452

Return to my character Angela.

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#121, if you care to know. Trying a different format for this work.
by Ayo
Wed Jul 11, 2007 10:05 pm
Forum: Storytellers Circle
Topic: I don't draw nearly enough comics.
Replies: 8
Views: 3986

Thanks Aaron!

I added color to this one. The next piece should be better, for sure.

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by Ayo
Tue Jul 10, 2007 10:27 pm
Forum: Hotel Adriano
Topic: Flight 4 is out today!!!
Replies: 42
Views: 23987

Congratulations to all of the folks in the book! I really enjoyed reading this one. There were some nice surprises and lots of fun comics!
by Ayo
Sun Jul 08, 2007 7:06 pm
Forum: Storytellers Circle
Topic: I don't draw nearly enough comics.
Replies: 8
Views: 3986

I don't draw nearly enough comics.

I was just fooling around and made this. I hope you like it.

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-Ayo2007.
by Ayo
Fri Apr 20, 2007 6:28 pm
Forum: Illustration/Animation/Design Lounge
Topic: Hipster Medusa as well as a drawing of a portly fellow.
Replies: 8
Views: 4249

Something new that's a bit different, with a similar interest:

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by Ayo
Mon Apr 16, 2007 5:25 pm
Forum: Storytellers Circle
Topic: Little Garden: I've started a longform story, wanna see?
Replies: 2
Views: 2090

More:

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by Ayo
Sun Apr 15, 2007 10:56 pm
Forum: Storytellers Circle
Topic: Little Garden: I've started a longform story, wanna see?
Replies: 2
Views: 2090

There's a fifth page, and it keeps going...:

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by Ayo
Sat Apr 14, 2007 8:34 pm
Forum: Hotel Adriano
Topic: Writing The Graphic Novel
Replies: 9
Views: 5011

The drawback to writing in thumbnails is that no matter how loose and fast you draw them, you'll never be as fast as you can write your ideas. And when you're writing and have your gears turning hard, great things can occur and vanish in moments--moments that you won't necessarily have to spare in t...
by Ayo
Sat Apr 14, 2007 8:27 pm
Forum: Storytellers Circle
Topic: Wither
Replies: 6
Views: 3392

It seems as though a few of the last pages are out of sequence. The comic seems pretty neat so far. I don't think you should change the angle so drastically and frequently. The characters are running in every which direction down toward the end of the segment. Keep them moving in the same direction ...
by Ayo
Tue Apr 10, 2007 6:04 am
Forum: Storytellers Circle
Topic: Little Garden: I've started a longform story, wanna see?
Replies: 2
Views: 2090

Little Garden: I've started a longform story, wanna see?

Hi. Some of you may remember that two years ago I was posting these daily cartoon vignettes about the lives of a group of characters. I've never wanted to make a sequential comic about them before, but recently, I have changed my mind! Here's the beginning of the first story: http://img363.imageshac...